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A Love So Blind

Contributed by white_tiger on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:52:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Hey this is an Indian sorta poem and so the stuff in it is based on an Indian arranged marriage. the stuff in italics means that the girl is thinking and the other is the boy.....enjoy!

Her arms adorned with bangles for the entire world to see
Pearls dangling from her eyes, shining wildly as can be,
Her eyes dark and innocent, carrying a dark secret inside
A secret so precious, with no one will she confide

Her anklets gently chime with every step she takes
With no one around, only her soul is at stake
Her strides are heavy; such a burden on her heart
But with her secret, she knew she would never part

Only her Saree is visible from where he stands
The emerald green colors remind him if his homeland,
Oh just to catch a glimpse of her style so rare
To warm his heart-broken soul with her flawless flare

Tears dripping from his eyelids, nothing would give way
If only he could turn the clock back to that fateful day
Just to see her face twinkle, her eyes full of pride
Why won't she act like the bride he knew inside?

Her insides churned as she saw his face in the moonlight
Tear stained face shining vividly throughout the night
Her face grew hot with embarrassment, eyes starting to fill
Pain searing through through her body, sharp knives ready to kill.

She could feel emotions tumbling back to her; why endeavor?
When life may be so cruel; if only time could last forever.
Just to turn the clock back was the only wish on her mind
The man that was waiting for me, if only she could find

A shadow walked past; a man greeted his dearest wife
His heart ached to take his place; he HUD hoped all his life
He remembered her secret; it was etched into his own heart
"We'll always be together; with your love I'll never part"

The man led her away; he could see her trying to restrain
Feeling all her worries and feeling all her pain,
Just one last glimpse at her strangled help of plea
The tears in her eyes forever being imprinted in his memory.

Copyright © white_tiger ... [ 2005-04-26 20:52:07]
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Re: A Love So Blind (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 09:43:00 PM AEST
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wow what a heart breaking poem. i really enjoyed this, it was an excellent write.
well done, original stuff and great rhyme

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