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Shallow Grave
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 03:37:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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can i save, what's owed to the grave
all my hair and thin bones
can i pray, without words to say
my soul does live among stones
can i keep, my eyes before sleep
the shadows do tremble with violence
can i be warm, before the cold morn'
or am i to shiver in silence
can i be free, of the addictions in me
and stay from the pills and pollution
can i despair, what's never there
and keep the gun's final solution
i can't be the sun
i won't know the fun
i don't care for stars
i can't hide the scars
But, there's always tomorrow to play...
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In_a_While
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2005-04-26 15:37:44]
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Re: Shallow Grave
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by brokensoul on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 03:46:39 PM AEST
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Amazing i can understand it i am in recovery from my own addictions well done
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Re: Shallow Grave
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by Pats4eva7 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 04:34:10 PM AEST
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GEEZ! This was was breath taking! I reeally liked your rhyme sceme, it was something ive never seen before and I think its unique...good job!
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Re: Shallow Grave
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by Alina on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 05:46:03 PM AEST
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MIND BLOWING! So simple of a poem yet full of so MUCH emotion and thought and talent!
ALINA
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