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When I Look At YOU
Contributed by
concrete_rose
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 03:03:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When i look into your eyes, the only thing i see,
is paradise inside of them, a place i want to be
A place where i can laugh and smile, and dry my tearful eyes,
A place that feels like heaven, stop the flow of all my cries
A place where i believe i can fly, so high towards the sky,
A place where i can tell the truth, without the need to lie
A place that's made for you and me, away from hell on earth,
A place to love so peacefully, and show you what i'm worth
Until we reach our paradise, all i want to see,
is me forever in your eyes, a place for eternity
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Re: When I Look At YOU
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:37:19 PM AEST
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A breath takingly beautiful piece of poetry. A pleasant and delightful read. Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: When I Look At YOU
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by wetnwild on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 12:34:30 AM AEST
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| Great poem, keep it up!! |
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