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The Victim.
Contributed by
x_midnight_x
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:03:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I am the victim,
i am the hard done by girl.
In a loveless baren world.
I am the one who never wins,
who gets the beats and bruises.
Who looks ugly in the bathroom mirror,
and envie's everyone else.
I am the victim,
you can see it in my instep,
how i walk and how i dress.
How i feed this fat face,
and cry because i'm large.
How i say i want a better life,
but never really make it happen.
I am the victim,
i'm lonely and unloved..
mostly because i hate myself.
I am the victim,
scruffy and unorganised,
because i cant be bothered.
I am the one who always moans,
treated unfairly...thats me.
I am the victim of my own crap thoughts,
my own crap ways,
days apon days....
Will i ever change?.
Oh god what have you done...gave me choices that i dont use..
Why cant i see i am the fool.
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Re: The Victim.
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:30:55 PM AEST
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| That's an emotional poem. I've felt self-consious about my looks before also. You're not alone. But surely there is someone that loves you, but maybe you just don't feel loved. I don't feel loved very often, cuz i'm often alone and lonely, but I know people who do actually love me. Think about the positive aspects of your body and do away with the negatives. Jenny |
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Re: The Victim.
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by MeenieMo on
Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:10:36 PM AEST
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| What most poetry today is lacking is emotion...i can tell you put your emotion into this. i have been where you are, it was lonely, but i learned to focus on the positive things of life instead of all the negatives. Keep up the good work. |
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