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Stars
Contributed by
PoeticSpy
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Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:50:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A
star.
Sits in
the sky.
Way up in
that vast sky.
Not alone, but
with others. Do they talk? Can they talk? If they
were to talk, what would they be saying?
We stare up at them and wonder. Do
they stare down and wonder? Or
are we up from their point of
view? How do we know?
We don’t. That is the
thing. That’s the beauty.
The beauty of the stars. That
sit up there. As we stare at them.
They’re staring-----------at us. We are
wondering. Do--------------they have to
wonder?--------------------------Maybe not.
And that------------------------------right there
is the-----------------------------------------beauty,
of the----------------------------------------------stars.
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2005-04-26 11:50:18]
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Re: Stars
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:53:22 PM AEST
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This is extremely well done.... very creative..
I did a christmas tree once....
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Re: Stars
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 09:54:53 AM AEST
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Now that is just creatively done.
What a wonderful post, i simply love this.
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Re: Stars
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 10:15:25 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, PoeticSpy!
This is the first of your posts that I've read and I, like the others, am impressed with your creativity here! I love the thought process - and the presentation! Nicely done!
Keep writing!
~SNM~ |
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