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in love
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:21:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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boy you got me on a leash
its this thang you doin' its got me goin' crazy for you
woo,im outa breath just thinking 'bout us two
now i wrote this outer my true feelings
i want you to know how much im in love
they know in the skies,its recognised from above
i dont want to hold back anymore
i aint you're average whore
boy im in love
its been this way since we kissed
everytime were holding hands
my heart is blushing
and outside im not showing
but now im telling you
i want you always
just us two
fools in love
crazy baby
you make me feel so beautiful
you're my sunshine
even when my make-ups smudged
and the tears are rollin'
you've got my heart stolen
you hold me tight
you kiss me right
boy you know you've got me
with your gangsta gun you shot me
you aint got me by strain
im just ridin' on your love train
boy i love you more than candy
you're my suga daddy :P
love you baby
you make heaven on earth
no matter what anyone says
i'll love you untill the end of my days...
~~~ LoVe YoU bOy ~~~
Copyright ©
Hannah_Heaven
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2005-04-26 10:21:44]
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Re: in love
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by undeniable2003 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:20:34 AM AEST
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| Love it. It speaks to me, I feel it on every level! |
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Re: in love
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:16:40 PM AEST
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This is a good write girl and I enjoyed the read. This line really grabs the reader.
aint you're average whore
boy im in love
Not many poems do you see a word like that and it makes you really feel what the person is saying. I’m not just with you, I love you. Very nice write and I look forward to more. Enjoy this love you have and take care….Steve |
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