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First Love
Contributed by
sride686
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Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:09:31 AM in AEST
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I remember the feeling of our first kiss
We were hand in hand when I caressed your lips
You looked in my eyes and I looked away
Afraid I would fall in love that day
But our love wont stop it’s already in play
It’s moving along with a lust that craves
It consumes my mind and consumes my soul
And leaves my heart out of control
From just a hug and just a glance
You left my heart in a trance
A trance of love and a trance of greed
Searching for this love I need
I love new love, love at first site
The feeling of love and the feeling of excite
How I’ll sit and wait all day
Just to hear you speak my name
Your loves left me breathless
that’s the least I can say
Now I lay awake at night feeling insane
Insane for that kiss with its soft embrace about my lips
But now I’m away without you
And I’m hoping this love for you is true
I’m hoping to return again one day
To fall in love with you
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sride686
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2005-04-26 10:09:31]
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Re: First Love
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by PainfulSpirit06 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:12:08 AM AEST
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| I can sense that passion in this poem. Keep it up. |
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Re: First Love
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:01:38 AM AEST
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every line is etched with a deep passion,i wish everything lasted like this,great write
this flows amazingly
love han xxx |
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Re: First Love
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by GurlyTye on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:40:31 PM AEST
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| so much passion...i love your work steve |
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Re: First Love
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:45:15 PM AEST
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Well spoken i say spoken cause your words r very audio as well as vivid, nice projection
straight from the heart, and clearly the voice
of longing is present . . .
Dorian Chabers |
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Re: First Love
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:48:57 PM AEST
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that's Dorian Chambers . . . sorry Steve
xtra comment never hurts nice poetry about
love and the many hurts inflicted by it . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: First Love
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 02:07:21 PM AEST
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lovely poem, it made me cry because I have just lost my love, I would do anything to have him back in my life, great poem,
pix xx |
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Re: First Love
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 04:41:52 PM AEST
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What an absolutely remarkable write.... I love it..
Jenni |
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Re: First Love
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 12:30:30 AM AEST
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A remarkable outstanding piece of poetry. A true masterpiece that captures what the heart craves the most, love. Thanks for sharing ur wonderful work with us Steve.
Well done my dear friend.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: First Love
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by breny on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 06:26:14 PM AEST
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wow Steve! This is really breath-taking! wow is the only word that I can seem to come up with at the moment lol. a very emotional and heartfelt write. absolutly wonderful :-D
Great Write!
~Brenna~ |
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Re: First Love
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:18:35 AM AEST
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This was really beautiful. A true majestic write on it's own.
I love the flow and rythem of this, thanks for posting.
Jane~ |
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Re: First Love
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 01:26:52 PM AEST
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| A very nice poem. I take my hat off to the power of emotions you write, so nicely wrapped in a strong rhymeful structure. It brings back some very tender moments with past loves. thanks for recommending this write. I look forward to more. dw |
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