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Destination, your heart...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:11:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Far beyond the valleys
Where wild rivers run free
The oceans waves crescendo
Leaving trails of foam to be seen
My heart has travelled far
In search of its dream
Looking beyond boundaries
Untold of or unseen
Following my heart's desire
To destine in your land
Seeking the sensuous touch
Of your warm and gentle hands
The search is finally over
Now that I found you
I can rest at long last
For I've found your heart that's true
Copyright ©
mina-1
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2005-04-25 23:11:58]
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:15:15 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed reading this
you've done a great job and this is beautiful poetry |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:17:28 PM AEST
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| your poem is very inspirational. i like it. keep up the good work. HUGS & KISSES |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by iodinelove on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:19:58 PM AEST
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true love....ah....you know...i was a firm believer in love once...but now days...i just don't know.
a few days ago a girl asked me if i had a passion for love ^_^
i laughed.
I told her i didn't have a passion, i have an obsession...i'm too old; too tired for passion....anyway...i like...keep writing. |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:38:08 PM AEST
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beautiful poetry that warms the heart and soul of the lonely . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by purecitrus on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:38:40 PM AEST
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this poem was so sensual and it had great feeling and imagination. true love is hard to come by...some find it and others don't...don't give it up!
Kate |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:50:12 PM AEST
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| awsome write.all i can say is wow. |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by Freda_Burrel on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:26:54 AM AEST
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| a beautiful poem !!!!!!!!! well done & well written ,, looking forward to reading more of them |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:33:19 AM AEST
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Awww Sue..this is sooo beautiful.... leaves me with such a feeling of contentment... I just loved the flow here...
Jenni |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:35:44 AM AEST
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IT'S LIKE A TOUCH THAT FEELS SO TIGHT,
IT BRINGS A LOVE INTO LIGHT,
A SHIP ALONG THE SHORE,
TAKE YOUR PICK & LET IT POUR,
DARE & HAVE A DREAM,
BECOME BARE SO TO BELIEVE,
FIND ME TO BECOME A FIRST,
IN TIME TO CURE A THIRST!
WHAT I'M TRYING TO SAY IS I THOUGHT THIS POEM WAS EXCELLENT!! I LOVED IT ALOT AS IT TOOK MY BREATH AWAY!!! A 5 STAR FOR YOUR POEM & YOU SUE!!!!
Lots Of Love,
DAN!!!!!
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 12:52:38 AM AEST
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Search is set in a dreamlike atmospere..concluded so well.
once again a sweet write :-) venkat |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:15:56 AM AEST
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Lovely wonderful write.Your choice and use of words is bautiful. Keep it up
Sinned |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:58:32 AM AEST
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Another awsome write Sue....an enjoyable read!!!!
cheers~coni
5 stars my friend! |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by sride686 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:39:25 AM AEST
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| Another very good write with a powerful ending. You are a great writer and a good encouragement and I thank you for your words. Take care my friend….Steve |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 09:58:03 AM AEST
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This was so soothing and so beautiful well done
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by Spazzo on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:14:26 PM AEST
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So sweet and so beautiful.
Scott |
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Re: Destination, your heart...
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by Channing on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:04:34 PM AEST
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| Very good write, expressing good imagery and emotion. |
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