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Grass Stains
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:11:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Grass stains on my knees
A thousand unheard pleas
My necessities beginning to rot
All these thoughts
I'm thinking are not
What I'm feeling
These grass stains on my knees...
Could I just bleed?
Make it so eay
But these things aren't the same
These grass stains on my knees
And your thinly veiled sympathy
Copyright ©
iluvpencils
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2005-04-25 23:11:03]
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Re: Grass Stains
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:44:26 AM AEST
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Interestingilly put. I was wondering still what were the stains from. its a bit confusing .But
with "thinly veiled sympathy " I wood get off my knees now.
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Re: Grass Stains
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by Channing on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 07:33:51 PM AEST
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| Interesting, and pretty creative. Good write! |
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