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Decayed Heart
Contributed by
justingunshin
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:22:16 PM in AEST
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Once I had a heart
A heart that loved so much,
having you beside me, where
our hands could touch
Once I had a smile
A smile that pleased you so much
While you smiled back, brought
me so much trust
Once you kept distant
A distance so far away from me
I follow'd but when I did
the long road never ended
as it continued to spiral
so endlessly
Once, out of no where
You said to me, we were over
I tried to talk, but you had left
Taking my love, as a theft
Now I sit alone, left in the dark
My body slowly died, as I drove
my form to nothing, from your empty lies
My heart then dried to nothing, a decay
created by your long harded betray,
Where I sat and laid, my body became
hard clay,heartless from all the decay
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justingunshin
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2005-04-25 22:22:16]
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Re: Decayed Heart
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:03:15 PM AEST
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amazing poem! i can honestly relate so much to ur thoughts, i have been thru a similar ordeal and like u i feel as if i have no heart left. its horrible i wish u all the best
great poetry, i enjoyed every line |
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Re: Decayed Heart
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:45:04 PM AEST
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wow Justin this is really really good write.
Your best so far.
Love mom |
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Re: Decayed Heart
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 06:05:40 PM AEST
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| I've been through heartache before. I can relate to your poem. It speaks so powerfully to me. Thank you for posting. Jenny |
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Re: Decayed Heart
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by Kie-Kie on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:13:35 PM AEST
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I can relate to that feeling... :S
I hope you're not really feeling that way inside, but if you are you've always got someone right here you can talk to...
Great poem 5 stars
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Decayed Heart
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:50:47 PM AEST
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This is a sad and well worded poem...You did a good job with this....Keep writing!
Scorp. |
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