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This Long Goodbye
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 08:53:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I stand here, gazing into your soft sky blue eyes.
In those eyes I see happy and sad times,
laughter and smiles.
I thought for months,
about what I'd say in your yearbook.
And I came up with this.
You've changed me, forever.
You've changed me for the better.
And as I look through my tears into your eyes.
I never imagined this kind of goodbye.
As tears fall from my face, here I stand.
To tell you this one thing.
That when it comes to saying goodbye to you...
...I just can't.
So many times I've tried this goodbye,
And still only three words come to mind.
I know we're only friends,
And that's all we'll ever be.
But I've been keeping this too long.
I just...
You're eyes...
You're smile...
*Sigh*
I love you...
Copyright ©
thepizzaguy
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2005-04-25 20:53:25]
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Re: This Long Goodbye
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by anonymussme on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:34:33 PM AEST
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| i love it! i got chills at the end. awsome poem |
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Re: This Long Goodbye
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:30:57 PM AEST
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Wow....good write.
Boy...can I relate to this!!!!
Jenni |
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Re: This Long Goodbye
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:21:25 PM AEST
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this poem was a real sad read for me because i really hate goodbyes and they make me cry like hell.
beautiful tho, i really understand ur pain of having to say goodbye i really do. at least u got to say goodbye
lovely |
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Re: This Long Goodbye
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by purecitrus on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:47:22 PM AEST
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| AMAZING! |
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Re: This Long Goodbye
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by Evshrug on
Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:03:29 AM AEST
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What can you say? The only thing that mattered.
Anyone who doesn't feel an echo in their hearts hasn't really put their hearts out there. I think the relationship-after-the-breakup feels fresh here, and again you are very sincere in your writings.
Some reason, I have this image of an abandoned puppy who was kicked out of his house, but still sits on the curb across the street, watching the doorway of his former domain. Poor puppy, pizzaman, you are a poor pup. |
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