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Teenage Temptations
Contributed by
Live2Die
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 08:39:47 PM in AEST
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Hello, My name is Scissor.
My limbs are sharp and silver
My handles are plastic and pretty.
I am here to help you,
Here to solve your problems.
Hi, My name is Razor Blade.
My only limb is sharp and pretty.
My handle is all gray.
I am here to help you,
Here to take away your anger.
Hey, My name is Cigarette.
I can be white, I can black.
Light me on fire, I will make you cool.
I am here to help you,
Here to be make you popular.
Yo, My name is Weed.
I smell like burnt leaves,
And everybody loves me.
I am here to help you,
Here to take away all your problems.
Hello, My name is Beer.
I come in bottles, I come in cans.
Open me up, drink me down.
I am here to help you,
Here to take away the pressure.
We are teenage temptations,
Here to give you false conclusions.
But here lays the truth:
Scissor cannot solve a thing,
He’s too busy helping suicidal’s.
Razor Blade can’t take away your anger,
He’s too busy spilling blood.
Cigarette can’t make you popular,
He’s too busy giving people cancer.
Weed can’t take away your problems
He’s too busy getting you put away.
And Beer can’t take away the pressure
For he’s too busy killing innocents.
We hope you get our point,
Because truly we are no help at all.
So please do put us down.
We are so sorry for the inconvenience,
And even sorrier if it makes you lame,
But think of it this way,
At least you’ll have your life.
Copyright ©
Live2Die
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2005-04-25 20:39:47]
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Re: Teenage Temptations
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:28:42 PM AEST
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| ooo good one here. very true, and I agree, this should help people with they're problems. very good write, and got the point accross. 4.75/5 |
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Re: Teenage Temptations
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:28:21 PM AEST
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Well done!! Thanks for sharing this...
Jenni |
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Re: Teenage Temptations
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by GurlyTye on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:03:50 PM AEST
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| its all sooo true.. extreamly good write,, i am sure we all have at one point or another given in to one or two of these temptations... |
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Re: Teenage Temptations
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:30:41 PM AEST
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wow what a thought provoking poem and its all so true. being a teenager in this world is not a easy task for sure and i have to admit i have succumb to every single temptation mentioned in ur poem.
we r so lost we have to numb our pain with somethin
great poem well done |
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Re: Teenage Temptations
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:31:24 PM AEST
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wow what a thought provoking poem and its all so true. being a teenager in this world is not a easy task for sure and i have to admit i have succumb to every single temptation mentioned in ur poem.
we r so lost we have to numb our pain with somethin
great poem well done |
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Re: Teenage Temptations
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:21:53 AM AEST
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| Very good write. I hope someone somewhere listens. Shey |
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