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where are you now
Contributed by
paul_x_walker
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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What happend?
what went wrong?
we where so happy
the feeling was so strong
you said you'd never leave
you wiped away all my tears
where are you now ?
i really need you here
i'm all alone
with my heart and my sorrow
my hope is now lost
i'll be dead by tomorrow
i shouldn't have trust you
i see that you lied
but i still think you'll come back
even though my hope and heart died.
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2005-04-25 19:47:57]
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Re: where are you now
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:55:07 PM AEST
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You did a much better job on this one.
good poem. |
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Re: where are you now
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 07:37:01 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed feelings, hugs n' love nessa
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