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RAINDROPS ON WAX
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:41:45 PM in AEST
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RAINDROPS ON WAX
Like tears that never disappear,
Tear drops of pain extremely severe..........
Buried deeply within your heart n'er appear!
Depth charges, losing a loved one so dear.
We, of the human race,
Bury pain we are unable to face.
Raindrops on wax will accumulate
Within our hardened heart, sadnesses await.
Pain so extreme, our feelings we sedate!
A spoken word, familiar view......
Trigger memories, and painfully update.
Breaking through sedated pain, hurtful debute.
Merciful are the kinder years of beauty
Clemency and malevolence from severity.
A different time, a strange place.....
Yet our feelings of love we still embrace.
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
April 25, 2005
"For I am convinced that neither death, nor life,
nor angels nor governments nor things now here,
nor things to come nor powers nor height nor depth
nor any other creation will be able to separate us
from God's Love, that is in Christ Jesus our Lord."
From the Bible-- Romans 8:38 & 39
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Re: RAINDROPS ON WAX
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:52:56 PM AEST
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awww hugs consue.
such an emotional write.
as always awsome job.
hugs
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Re: RAINDROPS ON WAX
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 08:09:57 PM AEST
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| nice job as always ...loved the picture...the words even more :) |
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Re: RAINDROPS ON WAX
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by shelby on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:44:41 PM AEST
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connie this brought tears to my eyes
such emotion through this poem Im so glad that your back:)
Michelle |
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Re: RAINDROPS ON WAX
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 08:44:30 PM AEST
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In the background of these tears there is always the "Herzeleid" (heart-ache os loss, loss, the awareness of which just cannot go away. No matter how much time elapsed.since it happened.
Very emotional, tender, and beatiful composition.
Heartache, --camouflaged. camouflaged.!
Let the good Lord attend to it ConSue.
Be blessed!
Love
Elizabeth |
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Re: RAINDROPS ON WAX
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 01:44:47 PM AEST
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I wanted to leave something clever behind ... but even after reading three times, all I come up with is .... Damn !!! That was great.
Nazzy ~
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Re: RAINDROPS ON WAX
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 10:30:56 PM AEST
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so true my friend, beautifully written, it is so great to see you posting again, connie, much love, big hugs always nessa
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Re: RAINDROPS ON WAX
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:49:59 PM AEST
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Somehow a bit diffrent from your usual...but no less touching and caring.
Thanks for sharing this with us.... |
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Re: RAINDROPS ON WAX
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 06:22:37 PM AEST
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| Beautiful thoughts and it means a lot. Very well done! J. |
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