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I Wear Black
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:32:40 AM in AEST
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Don’t knock me because im wearing black
So what im not wearing a mini skirt or flashing my but crack
Don’t judge me by my looks or my messy brown hair
There’s a person underneath c’mon please be fair
I’m not gonna let people tell me who to be
Im not gonna try to be anyone else but me
So if you like it or not I don’t really care
Go stare at my cuffs and the dark things I wear
I don’t really wanna stand out so ill slouch and hide
I wear black because that’s how I feel inside…
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Re: I Wear Black
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by justme03 on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:11:37 AM AEST
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i LOVE this poem. its kinda the way I am as well. well written and awesome. rOcK oN!
your poetry friend, ~Kortnie~ :D |
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Re: I Wear Black
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:27:41 AM AEST
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So true oh so true.
Take us as we are.
great write. |
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Re: I Wear Black
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:51:57 AM AEST
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im wearin black wit ya. ppl are so hypocritical, what are we going to do with them? keep it up... goth-punkers rOck 4eVeR
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: I Wear Black
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by suicidal_imbecile on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 11:29:15 AM AEST
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"I don’t really wanna stand out so ill slouch and hide
I wear black because that’s how I feel inside…"
Awsome! I know exactly how you feel. My older sister is the preppiest thing i know and she just guns me down every time i see her. She doesnt understand how it feels to so underly sad that you dont even want to look at people who are smiling. Great write!
Kate |
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Re: I Wear Black
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 04:53:09 AM AEST
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I wrote a poem with the same theme
when I was younger.
It was here on YPDC last year,
I actually rewrote it.
Some things never change.
Even as an adult people still mock.
Only difference now is
I kick ass.
--Ghosty |
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Re: I Wear Black
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by Maxximus on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 10:57:08 PM AEST
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| I liked this one... there is a subtle mood in it's form. These feelings of not fitting in, being strung out from all the rest are normal- we all get it. Glad you realize how important individuality is, without it we're everyone else. |
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