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I see blood rivers of hate.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 06:42:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Close my door,
Shutting me in.
Knowing I’ve little escape,
Besides carving into my skin.
Lock my door,
Shutting you out.
Pushing me deeper,
Into lower downs.
… Then say how you care,
But that I’m ALONE!
‘COZ YOU WON’T HELP ME,
UNTIL I COME BACK HOME…
Mummy I love you,
But you’ve cut me bad.
Mummy I HATE you!
You’ve turned me mad.
And I’m going crazy,
‘Coz I DON’T hold escape!
I see spinning DEAD daisy’s,
And blood rivers of hate…
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Re: I see blood rivers of hate.
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by sandysandysandy on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 06:57:26 AM AEST
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| Just wondering if you just don't want to listen to your mom, Maybe go by her rules so your throwing a hissy fit .. she tells you to go to your room and your get mad at her and take it out on yourself.. think about it. she loves you. and is her duty to teach you alot of things if you can't listen to her. you won't be able to listen to anyone. |
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Re: I see blood rivers of hate.
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by mysonnet on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:53:22 AM AEST
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| well-expressed poem. i had the same experience too. but surely your mom really loves you. believe me.. hees. just relax and dun let your anger get you |
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Re: I see blood rivers of hate.
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by blue_angel on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:49:07 AM AEST
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gosh, this poem... its like ive felt the EXACT same way before SO many times. but then i see the good that my mom has done for me and think... what would i do without her? so many things go unappreciated... sometimes you have to find those little things and hold onto them, and then when you feel like this think about those little things... its hard but your mom does love you, no matter what.
luv n hugs,
jennie* |
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Re: I see blood rivers of hate.
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by screwup on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:53:51 AM AEST
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remeber me??
i miss you.
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