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Companion
Contributed by
blueeyedevil13
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 05:54:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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These are my weaknesses
These are my fears
These are my efforts
Can you not see my tears?
Let me fail
Let me scream
Let me bleed
This is all I want and need
Let me run
Away from you
Let me lie
I don’t know what’s true
Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly
Let me run
Let me die
Let me fall
So I can lose it all
Keep me here
Against my will
So I can learn
Not to kill
Let me go
So you won’t know
What I do
Without you
Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly
I don’t know
What I want
I’m not a show
Or something to flaunt
Make up my mind
For me
And keep me blind
So I can die innocently
Go to sleep
So when you dream
I can down 11 pills
And die sleeping
Help me fall
Help me die
Help me live this lie
Help me jump
So I can fly
Copyright ©
blueeyedevil13
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2005-04-25 05:54:08]
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Re: Companion
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by emystar on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:09:47 AM AEST
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I hear ya.
In other words ya don't know if you're comming or going.
Very good writing.
huggs,
emy
Oh yeah, I'd call it a masterpeice as ya just don't get this type of write every day. |
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Re: Companion
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by mysonnet on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:55:33 AM AEST
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| ouch. nicely written poem and it sounded quite sad. |
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Re: Companion
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 05:39:30 AM AEST
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| amazing |
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Re: Companion
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:23:07 AM AEST
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| Great write! I really can't understand why this is one of the least read poems as it's great.Keep up the good work. |
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