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NOT CRYING NOW
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 03:50:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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she is not crying now,
she saw him for what he really was
but she just dont' know how
to trust another who wants in
she longed for him to be the one
now when its all said and done
she's not crying now...
she cried everynight for a while
but now her face carries a smile
if he calls to see how she is
all she will have to say
is 4 words instead of three
the words will simply be
IM NOT CRYING NOW
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2005-04-25 03:50:23]
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Re: NOT CRYING NOW
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by Nos_Bunny on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 04:24:47 AM AEST
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| Thats beutiful, is marriage as beutiful as poetry? I am soon to be married, to the one of my dreams (You have read her poetry, and mine.....wow....love connects from poetry is your husband one? a poet) get a 5 from me... kinda looked for a place in my heart with that but there wasnt much time I felt like that...or I did once... a long time ago...very beutiful |
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Re: NOT CRYING NOW
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by Lo2681 on
Thursday, 18th May 2006 @ 06:47:09 PM AEST
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Nice write. It feels so good to let a person know that they have no power over your feelings after going through something emotional like that.
Nice write~Lo |
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