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Last Night
Contributed by
rocks
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Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 03:24:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Alright, the moon does its part
But where do these tears come from?
So close to you, I cannot tell
If they are yours or mine
Just give me a shiver
So I know you’re still here with me
Again the moon strikes my pillow
Not pale
But yellow, just like it would be
When the end of the world
Is here
Can you feel the last wind in your hair?
The last warmth before the fires comes
To consume all the anger and suffering
Are you still with me?
I’m not quite sure
Just give me a shiver.
Just give me a shiver.
Copyright ©
rocks
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2005-04-25 03:24:24]
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Re: Last Night
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by emystar on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 04:25:58 AM AEST
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I see nothing wrong with the English.
It's a bit mysterious. Still it makes a person think.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Last Night
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:02:20 AM AEST
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I thought it was very well written.
good job. |
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Re: Last Night
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 04:21:50 PM AEST
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| A very good write...God Bless! |
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