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Contributed by heartless_soul on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 02:24:57 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

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She asks me “why can’t you take me?”
I say “because I know what I am. And I could never do that to you.”
“What do you mean?” she inquires.
“What I am is something that no one wants and I couldn’t put you in that kind of position.”

“But I love you.”
“Yes but what is your love ready to have to endure?”
“Anything.”
“You say that but do you know what that means.”
“Yes.”
“I don’t think so.” “It means that you will have to make peace with what I cant and also you will have to accept the fact that I cant.”

“You will also have to deal with my depression and my solitude that I want
That will incur that you stay away from me for certain lengths of time.” “I will be faithful but not reliable I don’t think that my love for you could endure seeing you hurt by me and that would make it worse.” “So I ask again do you think that you are willing to put up with this kind of a loving person for the rest of my life?”

“No I cant.” She weeps.
“I’m sorry it had to be this way believe me I wanted to change for you but you were never there for me when I needed you to help me and complement me when I did good and tell me what I did wrong when I mess up its not your fault its mine for not telling you.” “I’m sorry.”

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Re: Our Discussion (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 02:44:08 AM AEST
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thats a very interesting poem, I'd like to see other things you have wrote, what poetry needs is passion and imagination, and you seem to have it so keep writing

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