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Her Princes Needs Her
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
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Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 12:12:16 AM in AEST
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It is sad to see her that way
To know that she is so sad
I want to help her but how
It’s hard to know she feels that way
Coz I have felt it too for so long
It’s hard coz I care about her
She is just do easy to be found precocious
A girl who has forgotten just how
It feels to be loved
She has so much to give
So much that any one would want
So much that is easy to love and cherish
She needs her prince but it is not just that
Her prince needs her as well
They just need to find each other
But when they do she will find
That his sword and shield
Are his to serve and protect her
And his kind words and heart
Will be there to bring her of the dark
To bring her out of the dark and save her
I wish I could help her an be her guiding light
But its not my place to all I can do is be her AngeL
And be here for her when she has something to say
And be here for her when she needs a kind word
I can offer her my wings when she needs a way out
I will give her what I can to help
And I will help her when I can
I will try my very best to keep her safe
Till her prince comes and clai
ms her for his own
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Re: Her Princes Needs Her
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 12:16:46 AM AEST
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Well written, and the message was put across in an interesting way. There were a couple one line line breaks that where uneeded, those lines could have gone with the stanza before or after, thogh thats just a suggestion. I like it..nicelly done(again)
klia
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Re: Her Princes Needs Her
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by emystar on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 12:27:50 AM AEST
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Wow this is awesomly beautifull.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: Her Princes Needs Her
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 03:55:32 AM AEST
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you always write such beautiful words.. great job once again
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Re: Her Princes Needs Her
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 06:07:06 AM AEST
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We all need special friends in our life. Without others devotion it would be lonely. Keep on being a good friend the goodness you give will be returned to you.
Fantastic poem
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Her Princes Needs Her
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 07:02:36 PM AEST
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| Thank you so much for writing this John you know I enjoyed it!!! |
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