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Cold, Dark World
Contributed by
lostlove
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:36:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Make my world cold
Fill my heart
Heart with sadness
Take my smile
Make me lost
I feel hate
The love, and loss
You showed me life
Yet still alone
I need to feel
What I once knew
What I once loved
Yet my path
Filled with darkness
Why you, Why me
Why this, this now
Will I feel
Feel your touch
Your warm embrace
Or am I doomed
Doomed to a world
World of darkness
That shows no
No mercy to me
My soul, My heart
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lostlove
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2005-04-24 22:36:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cold, Dark World
(User Rating: 1 ) by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:55:28 PM AEST (User
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That's a great poem. I can relate to that so easily, I feel that way right now. I've been heartbroken before. I love the emotion in your words of this poem... Thanks. Jenny |
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