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Best Friend
Contributed by
panther_1978
on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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We haven’t been friends for to long but I know this
“You’re the best friend a person could have”
I know that I’m getting to involved
with someone I haven’t even seen,
but I know she a beautiful person
but she has hurt so many times
in her life, heart and soul.
I said, “I could change that”
but she said, “You don’t even know”…
She has put up so many thick walls,
that a normal person wouldn’t be able to break’em
but I’m going to try to break them down,
going to through all those hurts away!
I don’t know what it is… love, friendship or maybe more
but I do know that I can’t help myself.
Of all that she’s been through…
Like tonight, I was thinking about you and somebody else
But that “somebody else” won’t be in my life anymore!
I wish that I could help you like you helped me!
but I don’t know if that will ever happen…
maybe if I stop putting my heart so sincerely into you
I may find our friendship would develop even more
and if I wouldn’t write these poems about you!
But I can’t help myself; I guess I want more than a friend.
I want to be your poetry writer…
to write things like love, friendship, and even romance!
Will you let me be your poetry writer?
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2002-12-25 18:00:00]
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Re: Best Friend
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 09:21:49 PM AEST
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| Awwww.... this is so sweet.... if she doesn't let you be her poetry writer, you can be mine! ...lol :) Awesome write!! |
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Re: Best Friend
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 06:37:06 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Mike... Best of everything... (take your time tho.. ok..:>)
Hugs, Jenni |
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Re: Best Friend
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by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 10:19:19 PM AEST
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Your the best friend a person could have....nobody's ever said that before to me...i've always ran from people who tried to get close to me that tried to be my friend, because usually i end up getting stabbed in the back, but nobody has ever told me that i was the best friend a person could have...as cheery as i try and be im really surprised that you even saw that i had walls put up....it takes a loving soul to be able to see somthing that deeply..your heart is beautiful Mike...i love the way you word things because i know they come from your heart, and that your not just trying to impress me, or put anything fake up in front of my eyes to see..you say you want to be my poetry writer? ...I would love to have you as my Poetry Writer my beautiful friend...your heart is one in a million, dont ever let anyone ever tell you any differently, your words are beautiful because i know they come straight from your heart, and i thank you for taking the time to write this and to talk to me and spend the many hours you do getting to know me, that alone shows me you care deeply....many people aren't willing to do things such as what you are doing...You truly are one of a kind Mike...and i cherish you as my best friend and my poetry writer..*Hugs*....
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Re: Best Friend
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 03:41:23 AM AEST
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| good write i know how you feel i have been there it is nice to see someone who cares so much |
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Re: Best Friend
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by Mystery_Girl on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:51:25 AM AEST
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| this is certainly a lovely write...and I hope this special person appreciates it...which i am sure they do......hope this special person lets u be there poetry friend......take care and all the best......Tanya.:-) |
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Re: Best Friend
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:51:33 PM AEST
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| Awww this is just so sweet. The other person should be so lucky to have a friend like you. Such a sweet write. |
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Re: Best Friend
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 11:00:32 PM AEST
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| This is a very heart felt, beautifully written piece. *S* Cynthia |
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