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You Said
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:12:14 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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You said you loved me that was a lie
You’re not the one who sees me cry,
You leave me not my tears you see,
You let go of loving me.
I am left now here alone,
Again my hurt becomes full grown,
You turned your back on your love,
You let go of my soul’s glove.
I hate you with such a passion,
I hope to you bad things happen,
You lied you said me you’d not leave,
Yet it’s me who’s left to grieve.
So thank you love, thanks so much,
Now I shudder from your touch,
I do hate you & your soul
You are to me a lump of coal.
Lies spill from your lips,
Of my heart you gained a grip,
Oh how I was such a fool,
I never knew you were so cruel.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-04-24 22:12:14]
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Re: You Said
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:27:30 PM AEST
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YOU ARE NOT A FOOL,THAT IDIOT IS FOR LEAVING YOU-HIS LOSS! SOMEONE WHO CAN WRITE WITH SUCH PASSION & A TRUE HEART IS SOMEONE VERY SPECIAL!!
SORRY YOU HURT RIGHT NOW,BUT HIS WILL BE COMING SOON TOO I'M SURE!!! I LIKE THE WAY YOU WRITE,& TO ME THAT IS JUST THE RIGHT GUY'S KIND OF DREAM!!!!
IF YOU'RE AS STRONG AS YOUR WORDS,NO ONE CAN KNOCK YOU DOWN!!!!!
DAN!!!!!! |
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Re: You Said
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:47:06 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was well written and I
don't mean to preach but I didn't like what you
wrote about hating him and about wishing
bad luck on him. Other than that I though this
was a good poem. Keep up the writing and
don't let your thoughts drag you down.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: You Said
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:21:43 PM AEST
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| Intense write. I really enjoyed it. Excellent work. |
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Re: You Said
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 12:22:27 AM AEST
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awww pixie.Hugs
so much emotion and hurt in your writes.
pm me if you need to talk.
hugs |
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Re: You Said
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by sride686 on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 03:37:37 AM AEST
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| Like the rest of your writes I’ve read I enjoyed this piece. You put so much emotion in to your writing and it really sucks me into your world. I’m feel your pain and yes it is hard to loss the one you love. Take care and hope to hear from you again….Steve |
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Re: You Said
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 03:59:26 AM AEST
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so sad that people use love as a game, but when it comes down to it love is the only thing that is needed but so often we are left hurt and ashamed that we fell victom ot the game... great write...
tasha |
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Re: You Said
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by inoc on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 04:23:51 AM AEST
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What another well written poem....you ARE so clever Pixie!
Sorry this bloke was so mean....I wish you a perfect love that will stick forever!~you deserve that!
cheers~ Coni |
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Re: You Said
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 02:07:49 PM AEST
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So sorry he has hurt you Pixie. Some men can be so very selfish. Time as they say is a great healer and i wish you find happier days soon
Amazing write
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: You Said
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 02:59:25 PM AEST
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What a powerful intense write, i really enjoyed this piece hun.
It's so good to see you back in full force.
Jane |
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Re: You Said
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by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 01:08:29 AM AEST
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Beautiful peice pix dripping with anguish
lovely writting of poetry as always . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: You Said
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by mystix on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:02:23 AM AEST
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| Very nice been there and done that too.... |
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