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Bleeding Within, Without
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:06:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Tears run towards the qwivering lips
As blood bleeds from the knife in her grip
The puncture deep with delightful pain
That the sharpness of the blade could only gain
As she tears at her skin again and again
Fighting a battle she can never win
The sound of weeping becomes stonger
As she feels her life is only a worthless bother
Now her anguished thoughts deal her the fated hand
As the cutting edge slices her wrists
Turning her beautiful skin
Bland
Bleeding her life within
Without
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ForeverAlone
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2005-04-24 22:06:03]
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Re: Bleeding Within, Without
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:10:13 PM AEST
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| i love it clark, though you already knew that. i must say that i loved the last two stanzas the best. your ones before that were good, but i just loved the second from last because of the line with the end of bother as the rhyme. of course you had a wonderful ending, so i of course liked that the best as well. |
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Re: Bleeding Within, Without
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by Zeldianus on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:54:56 AM AEST
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| oh my gosh! how sad! very well done. i almost got teary eyed! |
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