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Missing You
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
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Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:20:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Many times a day do I think of you
You plauge my dreams every single night
You hold my sore heart together like glue
Some people don't think our love is right
But how can they condem a love so sweet
When they haven't a clue of what they speak
My soul soars to the heavens when we meet
In my knees you will always make me weak
We care not of what the future may hold
While we are apart I'm truely lonely
The thought of you keeps me warm when it's cold
My dearest you are my one and only
Know that my love for you is unending
In this poem, my heart I am sending
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2005-04-24 21:20:54]
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Re: Missing You
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by reflections on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 06:05:09 AM AEST
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WOW! Love does make a difference! This is your best yet. The one great lesson for poets is to write about that which you know. At this moment it’s the feeling you have for a special someone, and the words flow. Stay on track. Write more of those things you feel, fear, or love the most. You can’t go wrong as a writer if you follow that star. Cheers!
John
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Re: Missing You
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by Lenore_Poe15 on
Thursday, 23rd February 2006 @ 09:31:57 PM AEST
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very good, for a moment it felt like your heart was my own, very well put, and so much feeling into it, keep it up
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Re: Missing You
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by Faust on
Monday, 27th February 2006 @ 10:18:44 PM AEST
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You should be very proud of this poem. It's something that most people can relate to and is incredibly well written. Congrats.
Eternally Punished,
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