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i came to you
Contributed by
karmen
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:47:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I came to you,
seeking help,
but you only turned me away,
without a word to say.
Once agian, and a new day.
I came wanting answers,
but you only ran from me,
and didn't even look to see,
the cuts on my arms,
and tears in my eyes.
You just left me alone,
with not one emotion shown.
I'm still pleading and asking for help,
and your still leaving.
What am I suppose to do?
How do I make it through.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-04-24 20:47:23]
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Re: i came to you
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:08:04 PM AEST
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| talk to me. i will listen, i won't turn away. |
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Re: i came to you
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:11:28 PM AEST
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| I love the emotion you have in the words of this poem. I can relate to that, it seems like that's how my ex has been treating me lately. I'm willing to listen to whatever you have to say or ask. I wouldn't turn away from you either. Please email me if you ever wanna talk. Jenny |
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Re: i came to you
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by hellsfallenangel on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 09:16:29 AM AEST
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damn good lot of feelings in this write i love well g2g ttyl bye
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