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heat of hell
Contributed by
karmen
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:39:23 PM in AEST
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She's standing outside,
the gates of heaven,
yet feeling nothing,
but the heat of hell.
She was a good person,
but did bad things.
She said lies,
but never kept the truth.
She broke hearts,
but always made sure,
to mend some too.
She cut her wrists,
to heal her pain,
except she created more hurt.
She quit showing emotions,
and stopped crying on the outside.
It was held in too long,
now shes gone, a lost soul wandering.
Yes, it's true, she killed herself.
So now there she is,
right outside heaven,
while hell is still calling.
Copyright ©
karmen
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2005-04-24 20:39:23]
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Re: heat of hell
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by sprinter27 on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:03:20 PM AEST
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very emotional. i like, but sad. sounds like something i would write, from the heart. so if this is how you feel, please know you can PM me. I know how it feels, and i don't think anyone should put up with this pain.
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Re: heat of hell
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:19:24 PM AEST
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A RUFF RIDE! DON'T HOLD IT IN LET IT ALL OUT!! THAT SOUNDS LIKE A BAD WAY TO END IT ALL NOT ONLY FOR YOURSELF BUT FOR THOSE WHO CARED TOO!!! A VERY DESCRIPTIVE POEM!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: heat of hell
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 07:04:18 AM AEST
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| hmm sounds rough.well done. |
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