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A New Friend
Contributed by
kitty_express2001
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Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:23:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Today a new friend moved next door
I was so excited it was going to be fun
to meet a new friend.
I walked next door and said hi
Sally said hi
but.... a couple years her mother passed away they moved..
I was so lonely
Written... by kitty_express2001
Please comment me on this poem... im new here!
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2005-04-24 12:23:05]
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Re: A New Friend
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by pixie on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:24:05 PM AEST
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welcome to YPDC Kitty. a sad write. I am sorry that your friend moved away
pix xx
ps. there are many friends to meet here :) |
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Re: A New Friend
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 10:42:28 AM AEST
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| Welcome! It hurts when friends move, but you can write and email. You don't have to lose touch altogether. Feel better. Shey |
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Re: A New Friend
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 02:21:01 AM AEST
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| another good idea, but still, you don't get the feelings across. Keep at it, it's not so hard once you ge use to it! |
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