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eternal life
Contributed by
vampirelover
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Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:05:23 AM in AEST
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eternal life markes my despise
for a darkened soul wanting to cry
as i feel the pain rushing
i am screaming inside
wondering what is my demise
thinking about the weirdest things
life in a nutshell is what stings
its and interesting soul that calls to us all
bleeding so dry in the pit of the night
when we all seem to fall.
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2005-04-24 10:05:23]
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Re: eternal life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 25th April 2005 @ 02:30:27 AM AEST
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| Nice job on this one.I really like it alot. |
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Re: eternal life
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 08:34:37 AM AEST
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Vampirelover
I enjoyed this so much gave it a five.
Now I go on to worry of my demise.
You put some thought into this write.
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