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risen..........................
Contributed by
fixed
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Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:04:31 AM in AEST
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in memory of the dungeon,
enslaved
(in my self most of the time, i must not blame i must not name)
and the rescue you ensured,
allowing me to
*crash*.
Yes, in loving memory of the adventure..
exciting, hormone compelling euphoria,
in a trance
in a dance
with you
and not (i will not blame i will not name)..
slaying of the dragon and such
and touch
in memory of the kitchen
where my suffocation took its toll,
where i fled from hiding in that hole
to escape is better then to fall,
i always knew i'd end up a listed name on the wall.
And in this thought
i bought
my ticket into your journey
your dreams
your canvas:
I want you
to paint me.
with the plectrum i lived in denial
in your maze i finally smile.
making up for hurt feelings cost
and time lost.
Rested risen Arab finally risen.
I am Risen.
I am finally Risen for this game advertised..
in your arms i feel myself harden..
and rise.
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Re: risen..........................
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by Archie on
Saturday, 24th September 2005 @ 09:13:56 AM AEST
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This is not what i expected but it is good.
"This vast machine called life is reinventing itself and rising out of the ashes of it's own complacencey. The sleeper has awakened"
Quote from Dune Spoken by Paul Atredies |
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Re: risen..........................
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by 5MinutePoet on
Wednesday, 30th May 2007 @ 11:12:37 AM AEST
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| i see the rythm, but it seems to contradict the flow |
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