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LIFE WITHOUT YOU
Contributed by
EROTICADARLIN
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 07:23:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Life without you would be like;
A rainbow without colors.
Life without you would be like;
The ocean without waves.
Life without you would be like;
The day without the sun.
Life without you would be like;
The night without the moon and stars.
Life without you would be like;
Winter without snow.
Life without you would be like;
The beach without sand.
Life without you would be like;
A book without words.
Life without you would be like;
A song without music.
Life without you would be like;
A forest without trees.
Life without you would be like;
A Nascar race without drivers.
Life without you would be like;
A bird without wings.
Life without you would be like;
The solar system without the planets.
Life without you would be like;
A zoo without animals.
Life without you would be like;
A poet without a rhyme.
I'm glad I dont have to live my life without you.
'Cause I'd be lonely and blue.
Copyright ©
EROTICADARLIN
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2005-04-24 07:23:11]
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Re: LIFE WITHOUT YOU
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by pixie on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 09:56:42 AM AEST
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sweet write, but the over use of "life wihtout you would be like" did nothing for me, sorry
pix xx |
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Re: LIFE WITHOUT YOU
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by Dawny on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:03:17 PM AEST
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The...."Life without you would be like;" is a little repetitive, but otherwise you portray this well.
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