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i can't bring time back (sonnet)
Contributed by
mysonnet
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:57:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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may the words come out of my mouth;
it would be silent to you.
my actions are not worthy of your time.
and you would not know how i feel.
i have lost faith in hope;
lost hope in your soul.
it pains me to see you cry,
because it's you who i behold.
time is short-lived
memories, too.
moments have left forever;
we are fortune's fool.
if only i could turn back time,
i would definitely make you mine.
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2005-04-24 06:57:15]
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Re: i can't bring time back (sonnet)
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by pixie on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:59:46 AM AEST
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time is short so we should make the most of it.I think we 'd all turn back time for some reason or another if we could. a great poem, well written
pix xx |
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Re: i can't bring time back (sonnet)
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 07:21:01 AM AEST
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| agree with pixie this is short but absolutely lovely to read - excellent piece |
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Re: i can't bring time back (sonnet)
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:40:26 AM AEST
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| beautifully written |
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Re: i can't bring time back (sonnet)
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:34:40 AM AEST
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A nicely written piece of poetry. It would be nice if we could turn back time.
Sad, but otherwise enjoyable read. Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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