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The Memory of You
Contributed by
Baronhawk
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Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:24:00 AM in AEST
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Ever would I remember
the times of we together
though it's better to forget
your memory holds me back.
Long have I suffered
in dreams I often whispered
but it lives within memory
our piece of love's history.
Looking always for a reason
to forget all the seasons
but still I do remember
the times of we together.
You were my first and still the one
oh how I wish for it then
though I have ever since moved on
my heart still often sings your song.
Now and then, forever on
my heart is no longer only my own
for a piece of me has gone astray
along with you as you went away.
Ever still I will remember
all the times of we together
to whatever fate that I am due
I bring always the memory of you.
Copyright ©
Baronhawk
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2005-04-24 01:24:00]
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Re: The Memory of You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:44:11 AM AEST
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Hello, Wow this poem is very great I can relate to it so very much I really can relate to this part
You were my first and still the one
oh how I wish for it then
though I have ever since moved on
my heart still often sings your song.
well I enjoyed reading this... Great Write !
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Re: The Memory of You
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by Overstated on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:05:40 AM AEST
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this is an epic piece of writing i can really relate to the themes of this poem and hyave wrote to similar themes recently (check out my work) i think youve really written to an extremely high standard here with lines like 'You were my first and still the one
oh how I wish for it then
though I have ever since moved on
my heart still often sings your song.' really heartfelt stuff
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Re: The Memory of You
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by blackholesun on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:54:30 AM AEST
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| damn,this made me cry my heart out,really good poem but i wasnt wanting to remember paul my friend,how you speak of this person you are letting go is exactly how i feel about my lost love,i guess time is all that can heal the heart ,i can think back of happy times with him but it makes me sad cause i know ill never see that face looking at me with all that love again ever.well thanx for making me cry lol good poem |
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Re: The Memory of You
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:25:44 AM AEST
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| beautifully written, great job |
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Re: The Memory of You
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:26:55 AM AEST
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| That's a great poem. My first bf I didn't really like that much though, but my 5th bf felt like my first... the way he treated me so well. I still remember him, all the memories of the fun times together. I wanted him back, but he wouldn't give me another chance. It's life though :'( Jenny |
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Re: The Memory of You
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:38:47 AM AEST
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beautifully romantic and sooo sweet! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Memory of You
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 04:19:29 AM AEST
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Dear Baronhawk,
Ah dear friend, you are so romantic, and linger sadly in the past. Ah dear friend, have we not all felt the words of your lovely rhyme?
Years be gone, and we move on, but still somehow our memory of someone, someplace lingers on!
Exceptional for me friend, because to this I can relate. You are a marvelous poet Baronhawk....................fly high, fly straight, soar to the sky,
Always so happy to read your poems, you write like no other.
And thank you for all your lovely and loving comments on my poems! When you are 68 you too can look back and see what has disappeared, but best not for you and me. The past is for remembering, many times too sadly. We have control, best move forward, to reward our soul.
Warm Love
Lovingcritters
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