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Master of Nightmares
Contributed by
justingunshin
on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 01:06:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Being a shadow, a picture from your head
haunting you, while you sleep in your bed
when your eyes close, I will make the darkness
spread
Looking over you, the watcher from
the dark, what twisted tales, come
before you, for you to embark
The glistening red, covered in blood
Demon images will flood your vision
flooded down with your own derision
Where I beckon the pictures of hate
So you can sleep with desecrate
Fear is what draws me, call me forth
I will come, you the bait will feed
my hate
For when you close your eyes
you are in your own demise
the control I will have
nothing will save you from blight
The master of nightmares....
Has you in a grasp, very tight.
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justingunshin
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2005-04-24 01:06:12]
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Re: Master of Nightmares
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by Kie-Kie on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:01:07 AM AEST
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*shudders*
Wow that was chilling, I loved it :D
Although you did change your rhyme scheme, it made those lines stand out, was that intentional? Because if it was it was VERY effective :D
Still think you should get your work published, it kept me on the edge of my seat...that's talent right there :D
I seriously think I'm becoming your poet groupie lolz
Love ya,
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Re: Master of Nightmares
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by SocialMisfit on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:43:30 AM AEST
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dark, very dark, which makes it all the better to read :D cool poem it was very interesting.to read i liked the rhymes.
SM |
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Re: Master of Nightmares
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:38:39 AM AEST
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Wow this is immensely dark and sends shivers down my spine. A very well written and conveyed piece of poetry. Well done.
Hugs,
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Re: Master of Nightmares
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 04:51:26 AM AEST
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I like this a lot. The darkness just shines with your words.
Keep up the good work Justin.
Jane~ |
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Re: Master of Nightmares
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by Vampirequeen on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 05:44:59 AM AEST
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I have to say your poems outdo mine by 100%.I am so proud of you lol.This write is so intense and chilling.I can imagine you even writing a horror novel.I love it.Keep up the good work .
hugs
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Re: Master of Nightmares
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by pixie on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:42:31 AM AEST
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brilliant, dark, chilling and amazingly written :)
you have yourself a fan ;) lol
pix xx |
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