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Trapt In A Tear
Contributed by
Lenore_Poe15
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I'm trapt in a tear
Forever I shall fear,
Never to be out,
Even if I shout.
Forever I am saddend
Never to be gladend
This is were I brake down,
But I'm going to cry without a sound.
Copyright ©
Lenore_Poe15
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2005-04-23 23:59:26]
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Re: Trapt In A Tear
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by emystar on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:03:53 AM AEST
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Sad but well done.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Trapt In A Tear
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:05:15 AM AEST
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sad but well written. Though, it comes across as a little forced...even reading it more then once, but it's still a good peice.
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Re: Trapt In A Tear
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by SocialMisfit on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:35:59 AM AEST
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i agree, the rhymes sound a bit forced but its still a good poem worth reading agian.
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Re: Trapt In A Tear
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:55:51 AM AEST
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A sad, a little forced, but great poem.
Short, simple and sweet. Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: Trapt In A Tear
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by Faust on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:56:58 PM AEST
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I really like this poem Kitsune, It's very sad but it's also really great. I hope we can talk soon.
Love Always,
Tanuki |
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