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My Friend Death
Contributed by
bluerainstorm
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:24:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My Friend Death
I think of death not as the enemy, but as my friend.
Death touches my shoulder with his friendly hand,
making me want to surrender.
Surrender from my pain, hurt anger, and abuse. I feel
I have no one else to turn to.
Death takes my hand, I let out a sigh of relief and
watch as the razor cuts deep.
Death rocks me gently as I fall asleep, I see all my
life flash before my drooping eyes.
My family with their backs turned, my friends with
their canceled plans, men with their fisted hands.
My ears burn as the pain of what they say makes the
razor slash the other way.
"Sleep." he says to me, as my energy fades,
I close my eyes and drift away.
Jen S. 4-22-05
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2005-04-23 23:24:32]
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Re: My Friend Death
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by emystar on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:44:02 PM AEST
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Welcome.
this is very sad but written well.
U have talent even tho these type writes break my heart.
Hang in there and fight back. We all get tired but we must keep on keeping on.
I wrote a 4 part series titeled SUICIDE. I f u get time I'd luv if u read it.
keep writng and again, welcome.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: My Friend Death
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by emystar on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:45:50 PM AEST
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Soory,
was so mezmerized by the write that I forgot it was about your friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Friend Death
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by Jane_Doe on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 03:01:05 AM AEST
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| My first poem on this site was one of suicide as well. I loved the last two lines for some reason. Nice write. |
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Re: My Friend Death
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by pixie on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:43:09 AM AEST
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such a emotional and sad poem,you written his well.
take care
pix xx |
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