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Clouds
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daniel
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Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
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clouds rolling in...
clouds rolling in...
clouds rolling in
I can't see clearly
here they come again
hey can you hear me
can't see time then
what do you see
thinking on a way to get on outta here
but I've lost the trail and it's so weird
the sun comes through the morning
here it comes again without warning
and some good things here are forming
through the clouds...
rain pouring down
soaking wet again
cover to be found
that's in my dreams then
listen to the sound
something coming in
looking for the trail to get outta here
I'm stumbling down cuz it's not too clear
Copyright ©
daniel
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2002-12-25 01:40:00]
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Re: Clouds
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 03:18:35 AM AEST
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Hello , my friend,
I see you're still at it strong.
Very good work here!
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy
Happy Christmas and Merry New Year! |
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Re: Clouds
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 06:16:14 AM AEST
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Nice write, Danny.... Enjoyed it..
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Re: Clouds
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 09:40:35 AM AEST
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This isn't cheezy...it's kinda sad but it's more beautiful than anything.... very nice write! :)
~Dani~ |
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Re: Clouds
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by OreO on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 09:15:23 PM AEST
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Now see daniel there you go saying your writing is cheezy when it's not, this is beautifully written and like Daniela i agree it is a bit sad...i enjoy reading your writing and i look forward to reading the remaining ones i know will come.....thank you my beautiful friend for sharing your beautiful writings that i enjoy reading......
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