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Released
Contributed by
orangemen566
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:17:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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RELEASED
I walk through this world,
Not knowing how I am,
Hiding from my reflection,
Only makes this worse.
I'm too blinded from my past,
To want to open up for the real world,
Like crawling through a dark hole,
Never finding the heart of life.
I need to overcome my past,
Start a new beginning,
I will find the reason,
To why everything went this way.
I am now realesed,
Released from the pain and locked,
I'm now in free and love,
No more saving anger.
Released from it all,
Saving every moment,
As lessons I learned,
I am now released to be saved.
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orangemen566
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2005-04-23 20:17:54]
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Re: Released
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:42:24 PM AEST
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| That's a great poem! I can relate to that so well. It has a great lesson too, that you need to stop looking to your past and look to the future, and if there's something you don't like from your past, learn from your mistakes and hopefully start with a new 'life'. Jenny |
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by crimson_regret420 on
Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 08:53:39 PM AEST
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Really awesome poem. It's very well written and flows well. Very kool. lol
~Elena |
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Re: Released
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by dthwlkr on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 04:36:26 AM AEST
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from darkness to light, thats wat i feel is the theme of the poem, is pretty gud
i dont quite agree with the line"no more saving anger" but oh well to each his own nice write should get around 3.5-4
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