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INSANITY
Contributed by
Keila
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:11:27 PM in AEST
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in my head is empty space,
you cant tell by the look on my face.
the way i talk in riddle in ryme,
the way i question all the time.
i daydream and draw, rarely talking at all.
i dont like people, if you can tell.
im sure i have a special place in hell,
people say mean things to me
some times i want to kill and harm
but it is just a plan, a dream
it dosent matter ,as you can see
the only thing wrong is insanity
not a desiese but a gift for me
Copyright ©
Keila
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2005-04-23 17:11:27]
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Re: INSANITY
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:46:00 PM AEST
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for an insane reason i like this. i feel this way a lot. i just don't think about killing. but good write anyways.
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Re: INSANITY
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:41:49 PM AEST
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| how long did this piece take to write? i love it! its so simple yet effective! excellent work! |
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Re: INSANITY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:52:57 PM AEST
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| welll ive always thort that the truely great ppl in our world hav been wrong in the head. being insane is a case of not being rhe same as everyone else, a so forth, can come up with very diffrent ideas to every1 else...for better or for worse |
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Re: INSANITY
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by smiley_jennyxoxo on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 10:21:50 AM AEST
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| I love the emotion in your poem! Of anger with people, I feel that way almost every day. Yet I still like to help people with problems. I too daydream a lot during the day. I usually like to talk, but if i'm in a bad mood that day, I rarely talk at all. I'm not in a bad mood all that often. I don't think I'm insane, but insanity is another way to be crazy, different from everyone else, like normal people. I think I'm crazy sometimes. I really like the poem, great job. |
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Re: INSANITY
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by Channing on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 01:50:11 AM AEST
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| I like it, its very...insane. Nonetheless its a very good poem. |
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Re: INSANITY
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by mistersarang on
Wednesday, 11th August 2010 @ 08:52:00 PM AEST
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| amzing (: |
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