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Known by none
Contributed by
Adam_me2
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:02:49 PM in AEST
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I am an invisible member,
A third wheel in a crowd of thousands.
Seen by few, known by none.
I am a silent member,
Ideas flowing but denied expression.
Heard by few, known by none.
I am a lone wolf,
A misfit for life thats acknowledged by one.
Befriended by few, known by none.
In my pain I am not alone,
We all have this pain, forever in each of us.
We stand as many, known by none
Copyright ©
Adam_me2
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2005-04-23 17:02:49]
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Re: Known by none
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by Keila on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 05:12:59 PM AEST
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| i know how you feel |
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Re: Known by none
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by linagalMBfan01 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:00:54 PM AEST
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| this was awesome. i know what ur talking about. people see me but they don't know me. and they don't try to know me either which bothers me. but anyways awsome write. |
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Re: Known by none
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:58:14 PM AEST
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| i love wotcha done with the structure of this, the repition and so on. i personally agree with the last verse, i think most ppl dont have any1 that understands them truely, from the most talkative soical, to the loners. we all just have to take what we can get. good stuff =) |
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Re: Known by none
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by Channing on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 01:47:42 AM AEST
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| I can definitely relate to this poem, this is a very well written poem. |
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Re: Known by none
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by Lilly-Quill on
Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 01:55:17 PM AEST
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Very interesting write, for I've been on both sides of the fence and can truly empathize. I'd say that this is a winning poem, if only from Father-God's point of view; for His not in to popular opinion and neither am I.
~Lilly-Quill |
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