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VACANCY
Contributed by
sweetoccasion29
on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:42:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A birds song
changed
life itself
rearranged
Awaken to pain
flooded with tears
feeling your place
vacant, cold
open space
Whats this life
left me to
myself entranced
in the past
My soul taunted
forever alone
Copyright ©
sweetoccasion29
... [
2005-04-23 16:42:10]
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Re: VACANCY
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by libra on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:49:29 PM AEST
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| thank u 4 that devine poem u wrote. it reminds me of my own lost love . please post more? |
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Re: VACANCY
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:38:20 PM AEST
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wow didnt know what to make of this when i first read it - i loved this though! excellent gets better with every read so simple yet so complexed - with a erray ending...
-feel free to comment on my poems too by the way :) - |
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Re: VACANCY
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 07:02:16 PM AEST
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So much pain in so few words.
Very sad,but good write.
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Re: VACANCY
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 08:03:11 PM AEST
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Oh this is beautiful what a style what a feel
u my friend, r an excellent writter, this is just
lovely . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: VACANCY
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by Channing on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 01:42:45 AM AEST
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| Good poem, short but has the full impact of what your trying to get across. |
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