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Reserved Candestine
Contributed by
SimplySammixl3
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 02:51:43 PM in AEST
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Confusion is,
Taking me over,
I'm caught inside ,
This great illusion,
I think I like you,
But it's reluctant,
You're too far away,
You're so far away,
If I tried to tell,
What I am feeling,
You would hear,
My cry of a long kept secret,
But will you understand?
In a year we'll be even further,
I'll unwillingly leave you behind,
We may still talk,
But will we be true,
Will we be friends,
And will I still like you?
Copyright ©
SimplySammixl3
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2005-04-23 14:51:43]
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Re: Reserved Candestine
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by justme03 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 03:19:56 PM AEST
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I love this poem. it has great ryhtm (i can't spell!!!!) lol and i liked it. nice write !
~Kortnie~ |
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Re: Reserved Candestine
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 03:48:42 PM AEST
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This is cute...
I think a lot of people have been through what you have spoken about here, You should how it is, well.
Hope it works out,
Phil |
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Re: Reserved Candestine
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by Jimmato on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:39:18 AM AEST
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| not fair to end up on the least read list. The pace of this one is kinda frantic and probably conveys as much meaning as the verse itself. |
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Re: Reserved Candestine
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by Archie on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:10:24 PM AEST
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| I know how you feel. Sometimes I think it is good to pull away from people to the land of confusion but at other times i want to think clearly |
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