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Whispers
Contributed by
S_K_Williamson
on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 12:27:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Can you feel me now
that's my breath in your ear
I'll whisper real low
make sure that no one can hear
Gonna start at your neck
work my way down your chest
Run my tongue all around
you can imagine the rest
Let me kiss you all over
come on baby...my turn to play
Lean your head back... relax
I love to touch you this way
When ever you want me
you know I'm right here
Can you feel me now
that's my breath in your ear
Copyright ©
S_K_Williamson
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2002-07-11 12:27:10]
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Re: Whispers
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by Suzy on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 03:25:43 PM AEST
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| WoW..you go girl..lol what a sensuous poem you've written... |
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Re: Whispers
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 05:03:46 PM AEST
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This is wonderful Sharon...so sensual. Nicely done.
Your friend
Chrissie x |
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Re: Whispers
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by humphdj on
Thursday, 11th July 2002 @ 05:08:18 PM AEST
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erm................made me all hot!
Phew
Great write
Rgds
Dave |
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Re: Whispers
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by Patricia_Petro on
Friday, 12th July 2002 @ 07:16:05 AM AEST
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| Wow is right. Nice sensuous poem. ~Patricia |
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Re: Whispers
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by venkat on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:58:19 AM AEST
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| OMG, you are enchanting..hey Sharon.. you have real talent to express your soo treasured feelings...why dont you read my poems..(passion fire, A challenge,infinitely delightful, wind, please mom, lady of light etc. ) which may perhaps be useful. of course I am not expected to bother you ..can take it as a friendly advice. venkat |
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Re: Whispers
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 08:13:54 AM AEST
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Steamy read, thats for real.
Have to go out side for some cooler air, was beautifully written, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: Whispers
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 30th July 2003 @ 04:05:52 AM AEST
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| sharon, oh! wow! mmmm n' yumm! hehe hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Whispers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 03:31:50 AM AEST
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| it's good if you are writing porn or a rap song, but for poetry its a little coarse and a little cheap |
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