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take some time.
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:16:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Take sometime to help another.who you might think might need a hand. you will find the satisfation . Leaves you
feeling sort of grand.Take some time to live by virtue.In the best way is know.And respect the right of others.
As equal as your own.
Written by.. Butterflygirl40.
plz leave me comment on my poems and let me know what you think.
thanks.
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Re: take some time.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:11:17 PM AEST (User
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ok, now that is three poem i read from you, i find your poems good, well written but with one problem......you finish every one of your poems with "please leave comments" I don't think that is appropriate, but now this is only my opinion... |
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