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Her Dove does despair as Ashes in air
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:12:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A wing, could i be this thing
that carries this bird away
A feather, could i be the weather
that gives the breeze needed to fly
A tail, could i be the trail
that leads me to her memory
A flight, could i be the light
that lets you all see her descend
A fall, could i be the stall
that lets her live longer than now
but, till she leaves her nest....
Her dove does despair as ashes in air.
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Re: Her Dove does despair as Ashes in air
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by pixie on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 12:14:12 PM AEST
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that was great. flowed well,
pix xx |
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Re: Her Dove does despair as Ashes in air
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 01:15:04 PM AEST
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| really nice. |
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Re: Her Dove does despair as Ashes in air
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by Willofree on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:59:55 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem and thought provoking. Style is very unique and creative.
Good job
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