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Learning to Bend
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:37:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A baby cries
a mother sighs
and holds him to her breast
Such plans she had
but life's gone mad
she tries to do her best
A soulful gaze
the crazy days
it seems they'll never end
She'll make it through
what can she do
she'll just learn how to bend
The bills need paid
the beds need made
she'll do it on her own
No time for tears
or silly fears
she'll face it all alone
She will be strong
she'll carry on
and for them both she'll fend
She will not break
make no mistake
she'll just learn how to bend
L. Carling c2005
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Rakerman1999
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by pixie on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:53:58 AM AEST
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your poems just keep getting better and better Larry, that was amazing. I loved it
take care
Pix xx |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:14:54 PM AEST
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Awesome write, Larrry. It has been done before and it will be done again.... There are many strong women out there....
Jenni |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:40:59 PM AEST
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Larry, you write so well...
I can almost feel this, and it must really be terrible for women like that.
I guess life just doesn't work the way any of us planned, in the end.
This is a fantastic write, Larry.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by Overstated on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:19:26 PM AEST
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| totally agree with the other comments on here this is an excellent piece of writing - really heart provoking stuff i feel |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:16:14 PM AEST
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Not only a great poem but u hit the nail right
on the head my friend this one hits home
with my daughters, put your money away,
2night i'm buying, bar keep, a drink 4 me,
and give rake the bottle, well done lar . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:27:08 AM AEST
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well written...makes its mark admirably.
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:04:55 PM AEST
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| thought I'd posted a comment to this poem but it doesn't seem to have gotten through...so I'll say it again...very well written...makes its mark admirably |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by sweetangeluk on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 10:30:27 AM AEST
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Brought back memories for me as I had my daughter young. It sure is a hard struggle but you gain an inner strength from their love.
Your words I can relate to from the past.
Brilliant
A million roses for this one Larry
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 06:31:24 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Your work gets better each time I read it. |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by ForeverAlone on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 02:06:29 PM AEST
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Kinda sad, but still has hope at the end...Again very well done, and something I think alot of people can relate too, in the aspect of learning how to bend, for one reason or another
~Clark |
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Re: Learning to Bend
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by vibes2go on
Sunday, 17th July 2005 @ 07:34:33 PM AEST
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As a willow, a woman, especially a mother bends with the harsh winds of life .. there really is no choice. You have grown as a poet since we met last. You can write on any subject .. I thought of you once as just fluff .. romance .. hotsy-totsy.. but you are really full circle. A real poet .. I tell others that all the time ...lol. I need to listen to myself ... good work. I blow you a bubble...
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