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goodbye
Contributed by
JJTW
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 11:16:15 AM in AEST
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i no we havent talked
in a couple of days
but i thought
theres one last thing
i should probably say
i no thats its over
we both made it that way
but i want u 2 no
ill think of u every day
no matter how hard i try
nd how much i cry
i no my love for u
will never die
things shouldnt of ended
the way that they did
but these wounds cant b mended
or the words b unsaid
so since things must end
i will not lie
i still love u, nd miss u
but must say goodbye
Copyright ©
JJTW
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2005-04-23 11:16:15]
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Re: goodbye
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 04:12:07 PM AEST
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Sad but well said.....Again...don't be so lazy..type the words out!
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Re: goodbye
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by Sahara on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 04:45:33 PM AEST
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| I liked this write, it's alot like something I said several months back. But the grammar or lack there of did bug me a bit. |
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Re: goodbye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 10:15:56 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. |
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