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~Little Sally~
Contributed by
nos_bunny
on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:52:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Its cold again, I know your here,
The night goes dark, Your almost near,
Your crying again, But won't tell me why,
Your eyes look sad, Cold and dry,
I fear your presence, Its dark and haunting,
I let you in, Your lonely and wanting,
Your not as clear as the light of day,
But I can almost see, From this bed I lay,
Tears run down my face, Knowing i'm alive,
Your whispers threaten, As I long to strive,
Hurt me with want, Hurt me with need,
Everything I seek, Is just saught for greed,
Your crying again, I express my thoughts,
Your image grows clear, A smile of dots.
Am I good or bad, Am I needed or lost,
Is there a limit for this life I crossed?
Your crying again, Fading with fear
Is my life ending slowly, As your pain is near,
Warning me of danger, Leaving me to see,
That I must leave my past for my future to be.
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nos_bunny
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2005-04-23 09:52:29]
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Re: ~Little Sally~
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 10:43:15 AM AEST
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i dont really understand this poem,its beautiful all the words adding up to sad and needing,i dont know what i means the meaning for it i cant find,...good poem though
hanna xx |
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Re: ~Little Sally~
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 12:21:26 AM AEST
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This is neat. The rhyme is well done, and the poem tells of meatting the ghost interestingly. It's a pretty, dark, and lovely write, overall.
klia |
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Re: ~Little Sally~
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by Snookles on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 02:02:40 AM AEST
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| She seeks ur help and your wisdom to be free, I think she will be free when you are, so go to your future and come to me, I love you! |
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