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Blood means nothing
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
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Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 06:08:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In my eyes your the same
Change is too late
You've already cause this pain
You've sealed your fate
Your not welcomed
How dare you to think that you are
This is your outcome
This is what you get for leaving this scar
Things get rough
But who siad that was an excuse to leave?
Guess you just gave up
Is this what you wanted to achieve?
Dont ever tell me you love me
Those words are just another let down
I will admit that this isnt easy
But its your turn for this breakdown
Grow up and stop being so selfish
It wasnt your choice to make
You started this anguish
You cause this heartbreak
Even after the distress and pain
I'm still standing here
I am not the same
I am no longer as i appear
I learned your from your mistakes
And now I realize i a better then you
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clowns_can_burn
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2005-04-23 06:08:10]
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Re: Blood means nothing
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by cherrycoke on
Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:58:41 PM AEST
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wow i can't believe no one else commented on this .. i really like how you wrote this .. i can actually understand it and it's not random or amateur like some of the other stuff i've read on here before. good job
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Re: Blood means nothing
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by Shishke_Bob on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 03:39:00 PM AEST
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Truly tough stuff to go through, I feel for you and the pain that you had to endure,( I will pray for you to feel better.) this opoem spoke with emotioans and true heart feelings some thing that is hard to do (not knowing if others will understand of accept it.) thank you for sharing it with us (shows that you are getting bette) just know that if you need to talk we are all here for you any time. please do keep posting for us to read.
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